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The Heartbreaker's Society Author: Shade
(Added on Mar 10, 2012) (This month 35197 readers) (Total 48546 readers)
An 18 year old, conservative christian boy finds himself enslaved to a coven of witches.

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Reviewer: wistan (Edit) Rating: Apr 8, 2012
Good story, it kept me interested and engaged throughout! I like the idea of this secret society of women who enslave men, and I like how the author gave all the women distinct personalities and characters.
One issue for me is that all of the quotation marks seem to appear as black diamond shapes with a question mark in. It's kind of distracting... some sort of formatting incompatibility I think? (8/10)
Replied by: Shade of Heaven (Edit) (Apr 10, 2012)
Yeah, I tried to fix that. I think I'd have to redo the whole chapter. Do you know if it's possible to resubmit a chapter that has already been published, just to fix formatting mistakes?
Replied by: wistan (Edit) (Apr 11, 2012)
I think the issue is using smart curly quotes, which HTML doesn't recognise. And yes, I believe you can submit updated versions of a story. Just tell them that's what it is when you submit it.

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