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Anabella slave
Author: Anabella
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(Added on Dec 31, 2011)
(This month 16397 readers) (Total 35225 readers) |
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Anabella leaves her country to move in with her Master and owner.On her first day, she slowly learns what her life will be as an owned slave |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
purplesi
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Jan 18, 2012 |
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short and sweet, look forward to more (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Alix
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Jan 14, 2012 |
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Nice one. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 1, 2012 |
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I again must agree with the Major, bar the "horribly written", because to be honest, it's not.
On the contrary, I found the language and style used in "Anabella Slave" to be quite good.
Sure, there's no distinguishing between the narration and dialogue (i.e. no quotation marks), but for some reason it didn't bother me.
Mostly because the writing is good.
As for the rest, the story is indeed a tad on the lackluster side but a nice read nevertheless.
Only thing which had me going was the synopsys, cuz it would be so much better to know what your life as an owned slave will be like BEFORE you make the big step.
Especially since gay Paree is such a beautiful city to leave behind.
And pipsheeran seems to have a permanent erection...
JJ (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Major Littmann
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Dec 31, 2011 |
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Its a good story but horribly written with little punctuation, no speech marks and few paragraphs.
Otherwise it is a standard slave story with little to commend it but for someone new to this genre it could be good read so I'll give it a generous 7. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
pipsheeran
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Dec 31, 2011 |
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this is a fantastic story and very well writen, i like most of it coming from the slave (10/10)
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