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Cruel Couple - Deadly Revenge
Author: Basanistes
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(Added on Dec 11, 2011)
(This month 92548 readers) (Total 123956 readers) |
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A woman mocks the female half of a very sadistic couple and falls prey to their cruel, and ultimately deadly, revenge. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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JoshJones
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Aug 13, 2014 |
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Despite it's horrific subject matter this is slightly more than just reeling off a list of fantasies, the story has cohesion an no small amount of character development. Tortures are imaginative and described well. A few spelling and grammar errors but do not ruin the reading of the story. Despite being more extreme than my usual tastes a very good effort indeed, would be interesting to see this couple return for a sequel. (7/10)
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JMCLMT
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Sep 24, 2012 |
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I love a good long torture story and this story did not disappoint! I would be very interested in reading more stories from this couples adventures. (9/10)
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JimmyJump
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Dec 19, 2011 |
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Michael247 sums-up my thoughts and feelings pretty well.
JJ (7/10)
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susankarl
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Dec 15, 2011 |
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As a devotee of the most extreme forms of snuff, and with a strong preferance for the most sadistic of women being able to practice their cruelty on helpless females, it is not surprising that I thoroughly enjoyed your story. My one regret is that it was so short.
Please relate more of the methods of disposal your lovely lady enjoys. Susan. (8/10)
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Michael247
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Dec 14, 2011 |
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I'm sitting here, feeling slightly sick.
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I'm going to admit that I enjoy a decent snuff story. I'm also pretty heavy on the torture side of the tracks. But I have to say, this was extreme, even for me. Not that it interfered with my rating, but good Lord... what the two main characters did to poor Carmen. I don't care how rotten the bitch was. No one deserved that!
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All of which made for an absolutely fantastic story. Honestly, this isn't so much erotica as just plain old gore. The torments applied to Carmen were sexual in nature, but also physically destructive and painful on a level that matches things like being burned alive - yet at a slower pace. The author worked in scat, watersports, and a wide variety of other tortures, all in which to titillate. I'm pretty much disturbed that I found it erotic.
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The story, despite it's fuck fest of horror, is hampered with misspellings, wrong words, tense errors, and other mistakes that make me suspect that author's first language is not English. If that's the case, then I grant him a little leeway and kudos for trying something so far out of his comfort zone. I also should mention that the author needs to write with HTML code processing in mind. HTML does not read "tab", thus you need to hit the enter key at least once. It will make the formatting easier to get through and help your readers.
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The plot of Cruel Couple - Deadly Revenge is simplistic in its execution, but as I've maintained time and time again, a good story teller can take a tired worn out cliched plot line and make it sing. In this case the author did just that. Yes, I found it disturbing, horrific, but there was just something compelling at the thought of Carmen being shoved, alive and conscious, into the furnace and slowly roasted. Or the absolute horror of grilling Carmen's breasts, while still attached to her body! That was pure genius. Gross, but genius.
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All in all the reason this story only rated a seven was because of the multitude of formatting and grammar errors. There are probably other things I would recommend, but I'm still too dazed from the horror that I can't think of anything else!
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Yours Faithfully, Michael Alexander
(www.michaelalexanderstories.com) (7/10)
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