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The First Day
Author: Dana Williams
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(Added on May 5, 2002)
(This month 67430 readers) (Total 93017 readers) |
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This story describes a girl's first day as a sex slave, in which she is auctioned off and then used by her new masters. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
BigCat
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Jul 31, 2005 |
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This lady can write like hell. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
carolslave52
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May 7, 2002 |
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Very well done! Really captures her emotions and conflicts. Would love to read more from this author, perhaps a labor slave story. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
boccaccio2000g
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May 5, 2002 |
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I found the writing of this story to be far more polished than most. 9.5 for style, 8.5 for content. (And "content" has more to do with my preferences than the author's failings). An excellent effort (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
RubbrSpatula
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May 5, 2002 |
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The story is mostly a narrative tale about a woman taken by a conquering nation and used as a toy for sex-- a very old story, but a classic. Could have done with more detail and realism, but it never tried to be Dr. Zhivago-- just a good read, which it is. (8/10)
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