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Lucy
Author: InteractiveBDSM
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(Added on Jul 4, 2011)
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A young woman alters her body forever, and begins a voluntary life of sexual slavery. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Myya
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Aug 22, 2011 |
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Amazing story, but I've been hoping for an update... any chance of that happening? (8/10)
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nominalista
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Jul 25, 2011 |
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I really appreciate this type of topic, as you can tell by my own writing. Now I really want to know what happens next. Probably the hardest part is keeping the psychological characterization believable under extreme circumstances. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
SamCurious
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Jul 9, 2011 |
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I read this with a conflicted feeling - she wants the surgery but doesn't like what she is doing to herself. So why would she do it? (7/10)
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- Replied by:
interactiveBDSM
(Edit) (Jul 10, 2011)
- Ha, fair point. I think we'll say that she has a higher than human average short term desire here that she can't help but enact even in the knowledge of what it means for her...
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| Reviewer:
Snark
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Jul 6, 2011 |
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Bravo! And I reserve the right to increase the rating as the story continues. This entire mechanized/modification concept is one of my favorites, plus the story doesn't assault my suspension of disbelief. Well described though could use a bit more dialog. A little too narrative...but so far there have been few characters to interact with. Still an enjoyable tale and one I look forward to seeing continue. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
interactiveBDSM
(Edit) (Jul 7, 2011)
- Thank you very much! I wanted to take it a little more slowly and focus on narrative more than a lot of stories you find online; it's important to me to explore feelings and thoughts and they're something all too often lost in erotic stories - some are just play-by-plays of some BDSM scene. I'm not against it, but it doesn't appeal to me, so I decided to write this! :D
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