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Controlling Sarah.
Author: John Tagliaferro, Sarah and Suki
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(Added on Dec 6, 2010)
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Sarah has just been assigned a new secretary, Nancy, who wants her new boss to be an executive. Nancy also has designs on Sarah's timid husband, Edward. |
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| Reviewer:
TheMiller
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Dec 23, 2010 |
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Update: read newly added part 11. Great scenes and left me wanting more again. While not an overt prostitution element, the sense was there in the motel scene. Interesting depiction of a private D/s club too. The victim couple seems to be getting closer.
Original review: Interesting story with a well thought development.
If the writer was writing a vanilla couple this would fall apart. He brings forward the tendancies of true submissives involved in casual play and uses it against them in an extortion/forced slavery (mild) story. The subs know how to be sub but they are in realworld not agreed playworld.
Ed could have resisted more or more of his thoughts should have been revealed as he submitted to Nancy. Sarah's perspective sounded good
Very well written. If you are looking for hardcore, this is not it. Good couple controlling another couple story.
My first read here, will be back for more. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
John Tagliaferro
(Edit) (Dec 7, 2010)
- Thank you for your kind review!
Not sure what I can ad to Edward's character to bring out more of his lack of thought, to go with his almost juvenile personality.
This was a group effort, but it looks like I will be the only one continuing the story past part 10.
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Ashley Zacharias
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Dec 13, 2010 |
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This is a well-written story that provides an interesting twist on the boss-blackmailed-into-submission plot. In this case, the boss is not only submissive by nature, but is married to a submissive man. What happens in such a situation when a naturally dominant couple force their way into the woman's office and home?
Apparently this story was written as a group effort by three authors. The lead author, John must have done an excellent job editing it because the story flows without any disturbing breaks in continuity.
I'm pleased to see that more installments are coming. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
John Tagliaferro
(Edit) (Dec 14, 2010)
- Ashley,
Thank you so much for the glowing review! A new chapter is almost ready.
JT
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emodis
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Dec 13, 2010 |
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i enjoyed this story, it was well thought out and well told. It would be interesting to find out a little of the history between Sarah and Edward so as to understand how Edward became the total sub that he is. i look forward to reading more of their "adventures." (9/10)
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- Replied by:
John Tagliaferro
(Edit) (Dec 13, 2010)
- Thank you so much for your kind review!
As we (the group) were working the story I was concerned about giving the reader enough information about how Edward ended up a total cuckold against the wishes of Sarah. Some of my "clues" were overridden by Sarah and Suki. In the portion already posted, it is mentioned that Edward had severe submissive tenancies that emerged after the marriage. May not have brought out that whenever Sarah objected to anything at all, he made it into a rule until he was essentially doing nothing but taking care of the daughter and the house as Sarah pursued her kinks. Will try to bring more of the history out in the chapter I am writing now. Looking for proofers and an editor for that if anybody is interested. The next part is almost 5,000 words as it sits and takes the couple deeper into the clutches of Nancy and Joe.
I cannot thank all of the readers enough for making this so popular.
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