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     Population Control
    
    Author: A.Broadsword
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    (Added on Nov 9, 2010)
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      In Rotneb Province in Doesia in future world 18 year girls culled if they fail school examination, Ann and Tina true story is here | 
   
 
 
   
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    | Reviewer: 
    Mr. Willit
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    Dec 5, 2010 | 
   
   
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        This has got to be a spoof.  Almost no sex or torture of any kind - just rambling conversations in broken English. I suppose this is an inside joke.  If you're not in on it though, don't bother. (3/10) 
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        - Replied by: 
a.broadsword
  (Edit)  (Jan 12, 2011)
 
        - Something is wrong here, this seems to be someone else's story and synopsis under my name, I have re submitted it.
 
        - Replied by: 
a.broadsword
  (Edit)  (Jan 30, 2011)
 
        - You haven't read my story, It is posted as Part two 16th JAN 2011
 
       
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    | Reviewer: 
    Major Littmann
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    Nov 11, 2010 | 
   
   
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        An outrageous spoof on Rotneb's work, If you know Rotnebs work this is a 10/10 if not then it's pretty dire and you won't understand it, but it had me chuckling, when I should have been throwing up, Maybe Broadsword and Rotneb should collaborate? (7/10) 
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        - Replied by: 
a.broadsword
  (Edit)  (Jan 12, 2011)
 
        - Something is wrong here, this seems to be PieterM's story and synopsis under my name, I have re submitted my own story so hopefully it will be changed. 
  
        - Replied by: 
a.broadsword
  (Edit)  (Jan 30, 2011)
 
        - My Story is Part Two, part one is nothing to do with it.
 
       
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