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Emma\'s Instruction
Author: SarahSub
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(Added on Oct 27, 2010)
(This month 59241 readers) (Total 66028 readers) |
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Emma and her boyfriend have his father\'s house all to themselves for the night, or so she thinks. She soon becomes educated in how to properly service her new master. |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Oct 28, 2010 |
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A peculiarity, which has nothing to do with the story, is that we've got SarahSub writing about a character named Emma. Now I must check if author emmasub has written a story with a character named Sarah... that would be neat.
"Emma's Instruction" is well written.
What starts off as a bit of a 'standard' setting, is almost immediately revved up with a twist in the form of (nah, you'll have to read it...).
To my delight, SarahSub manages to pull it off without getting corny or cheesy. Nope. The twist and the ensuing situation is nicely done, thank you very much.
A bit short, yes, but there's room for expanding the tale. On the other hand, what's been posted could stand --albeit a tad feeble-- on its own.
JJ (8/10)
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