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School Daze Fucking
Author: dale10
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(Added on Jun 17, 2010)
(This month 4 readers) (Total 25700 readers) |
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What some young girls have to do to pass their classes. It's shocking. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
sissykris
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Dec 7, 2010 |
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please write more to this story it was great! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
theroadtoad
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Jun 21, 2010 |
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I enjoyed the story. It needs to be developed more. Please continue the story. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
IDCrewDawg
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Jun 21, 2010 |
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Spelling and grammar errors detract from the story too much. (2/10)
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- Replied by:
sissykris
(Edit) (Dec 7, 2010)
- I noticed that too but did not think it detracted from the story enough to effect the rating I gave it or to merit a one star
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jun 20, 2010 |
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Story starts off with a rather peculiar observation; that of it being pleasant to see or hear about young sex.
Anybody who has a clue as where one can see such a thing, please give me a sign. Besides, what exactly is "young sex" anyway?
Dale10 also makes it sound like, once school's out for summer, you can't get out of the house without stumbling across entangled student bodies, as the kids seem to be at it like rabbits with total disregard of their surroundings.
I happen to have a nice garden --both in front and at the back of the house-- but to my dismay I've never encountered the phenomenon as described in this here story. Maybe I'll sprinkle the lawn with condoms and morning-after pills. See what happens.
Anyway, I found "School Daze Fucking" but a tedious affair as dale10 gives everything an unsettling obviousness which comes across as if the author is more interested in getting his rocks off than in bringing a well-balanced story with a bit of a plot.
Looking for a plot in "School daze Fucking" is like searching for water in the desert, with the difference you'll have more luck doing the latter.
Flat, uninspired writing, I'm afraid.
JJ (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
tommyboy1121
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Jun 18, 2010 |
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I enjoy it, I like the way it's left open to go anyway anyone would like, looking to read more. (10/10)
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