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The Clock
Author: milflover
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(Added on Jun 9, 2010)
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13 stunning female models are kidnapped and tortured. The finale is the infamous clock! |
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Jun 13, 2010 |
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i think JimmyJump is being overly generous. there is many more far better similar stories out there, this one added nothing new to the genre. (4/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jun 12, 2010 |
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Another wet dream put to paper. Could work (I hope) for the author, it didn't for me.
Writing is okay, but the subject is just a summation of lecherousnesses without a real story as a container.
Acceptable, but there's far better out there.
JJ (6/10)
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