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Debased
Author: Surtea
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(Added on May 9, 2010)
(This month 28096 readers) (Total 61544 readers) |
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A dispute at work leads to an exemplary punishment... |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 6, 2012 |
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As usual, I find these pamphlets too short (and they work better when the inspirational drawing by Farrel shows), but "Debased" hit more of my buttons than usual, which of course makes me biased, but hey! who cares.
I hope Surtea will retreat from retreat because we desperately need quality stories around here.
Was gonna go for a niner but went for a tenner because of lack of imagination from a couple of reviewers.
JJ (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
ashley_craves_cruel
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Jun 9, 2010 |
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The touch of whimsy detracts from eroticism. But I am not a critic. Your sexual scenes make me crazy. I love them. Breast discipline has always been a personal and real love of mine.Please don't be discouraged by the 'literary' academics. And keep feeding me. (8/10)
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jls152
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May 12, 2010 |
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Is this one of your early works? It is not any where close to the calibre of Milky. You did not develope this story as well. And you seemed to rush thru it like you were in a hurry to cum again. But I will always look for your writings. Milky hooked me. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
Surtea
(Edit) (May 12, 2010)
- You are right that this was written some time back. But it is meant to be a short story based around the picture, which the site continuously refuses to load. I confess I am getting fed up with the abuse and with BDSMLibrary and will probably give up posting here. Cheers - Surtea
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| Reviewer:
CrazedDog
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May 11, 2010 |
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Good premise but I would have enjoyed a bit more depth in the story, more detail. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Belpheghor
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May 11, 2010 |
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Geile Kurzgeschichte. Ich hoffe bald mehr dieser kleinen Geilmacher lesen zu dürfen.
Eigentlich ist es nur eine 8 oder 9, aber da jemand ohne Fantasie nur eine 6 gab, erlaube ich mir, dir eine 10 zu geben, als ausgleichende Gerechtigkeit. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Major Littmann
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May 10, 2010 |
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It doesn't really work without the picture and works even less well with the picture, clearly the lady had a dodgy oyster at the orgy and has the shits, quite what this has to do with the story is somewhat tenuous but hey what ever turns you on.
And this did't turn me on especially when it appears to be a 9/10 (6/10)
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- Replied by:
Surtea
(Edit) (May 11, 2010)
- Ho hum. I am sorry you didn't like it. A lady having a dodgy oyster isn't terribly horny for me. Whereas a lady being forced to have an enema and having to display her newly ringed breast is. I am not sure I could write a story around shellfish! And the rating I gave it is because I have to due to the nature of posting reviews and it is the average of what my stories get. Yours in contrast is the lowest score I've ever received. But thank you for reading it!
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| Reviewer:
Surtea
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May 10, 2010 |
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As usual... Picture fails to load.
To see it as it should be go to:
http://www.understories.com/understories/djian14t/surteax.html (9/10)
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