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Adrianna and her Daddy
Author: Sir Wayne
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(Added on Apr 3, 2010)
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This is a true story. I have changed the names to protect those involved. |
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Average (?):  (4/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Jun 8, 2010 |
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i tend to agree with SirPat45, but am willing to give a higher rating on the basis that this story is just about acceptable if it is the opening for a longer story. However i would expect to see more characterization and a lot more detail about the interogation and the girls physical and verbal response. (4/10)
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SirPat45
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Apr 6, 2010 |
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I'm not sure what to say about this story. To me it was just a bunch of lines typed on the paper. If this is a true story and you are such an interrogator then I would like to know where the interrogation was. I am sorry because I usually do not write a bad review for stories but this wa absolutely boring. (2/10)
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