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The Punishment List
Author: Abel
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(Added on Feb 14, 2010)
(This month 58654 readers) (Total 69865 readers) |
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A young woman sits nervously in her prison cell, awaiting a birching. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Feb 16, 2010 |
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These few lines can hardly be called a story. They're not even an event, as there's nothing happening at all.
These few lines speak of a few things that happened before, and of something that is yet to come, but the 'now' is empty, safe for the girl, a punishment frame and a pile of clothes...
"The Punishment List" may be very well written and coherent, it leaves the reader on his/her hunger, just because of the aformentioned inertia.
Can't go higher than an eight, for the time being, as there's simply not enough there to warrant a higher rating.
Quality? Yes. Substance? Alas, not. Yet. Maybe.
JJ (8/10)
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