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The Enemy's Daughter
Author: Powerone
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(Added on Mar 10, 2002)
(This month 151798 readers) (Total 229769 readers) |
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This is a story of the punishment of a female by the authorities to get back at what her Father had done to the people in power. The Enemy's Daughter is a collaboration of Katie Lynch and myself, Powerone. We hope that by partnering a male and female writer, a better story will appear. If you liked this story, please e-mail either one of us. |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 24, 2004 |
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what else can i say (9/10)
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veru_skjava
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Jul 8, 2002 |
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MMMMMMM fantastic premise, evil, wonderfully diabolic insruments, though rarely do male victims interest me, the delicous means of torturing both victims, individually and together leaves me waiting with great anticipaion for more updates... really looking forward to a lengthy story... <br>***EXCELLENT collaboration of authors!!!*** (10/10)
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bigone
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May 2, 2002 |
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Good story, but perhaps too much gadgetry. The fuck scene between father and daughter would be more humiliating if they simply had to give each other pleasure before that large audience, without the electricity, etc. Still, good humiliation, which hopefully will intensify as the story continues. (8/10)
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elkine
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Apr 10, 2002 |
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A powerful story and a good deal of ideas for tormenting Courtney and her father. I like it and I can hardly wait to read the following chapters! (8/10)
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Llabmik
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Mar 12, 2002 |
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Definitely a co-operative triumph! I like the ideas and also the detail. I definitely want to read more by this team! (10/10)
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