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Dragon Lady
Author: J Lewis
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(Added on Feb 7, 2010)
(This month 100363 readers) (Total 140793 readers) |
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A good looking American girl takes the oppurtunity to visit a college exchange student she befriended in the states. Offered an extended vacation in Tokyo, even plane fare, she begins her sexual, erotic odyssey almost immediately on arrival... An on-going storyline |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
ibex
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Nov 8, 2014 |
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I got goosebumps reading the story. It's a very good introduction to the transformation of Lynn into a submissive sex slave, hoping for more chapters to come. There are so many possibilities... (10/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jun 11, 2010 |
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Well written, intriguing account. Surreal, almost. Story seems to be suffering from a lack of 'how-and-why'.
The addition of the (supposed) drugs don't solve the mystery, but they help the reader as a means to explain the fuzziness. This fuzziness is like a smoke machine got stuck on the opener of a band's gig. The music is loud and clear, but the band is silhouetted in a veiled shroud.
"Dragon Lady" 's setting is also crystal clear to the reader, but Lynn is seeing things through a cotton-wool blurr.
Works well, in my opinion.
Switching to patronizing mode: here's a few synonyms for 'jiggling' (must say you found some on your own -grin-): dither; flicker; flitter; flutter; jar; oscillate; palpitate; pulsate; quake; quaver; quiver; shake; thrill; throb; tremble; twang; twitter; vibrate...
Oh, and to the anti-drug squad below: your replies just made my high. On Adrenaline. Which got me even higher as I had to gasp for air, inhaling another highly intoxicating (and poisenous) drug known as Oxygen. There you go.
JJ (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
suissepervert
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Feb 15, 2010 |
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Excellent written story. Except for the use of drugs. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Major Littmann
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Feb 8, 2010 |
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Excellent, the occasional wrong word, bare for bear, for example but that doesn't matter at al in this nice gentle consensual introduction to bondage that has me wanting and imagining more, 10/10 (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Major Littmann
(Edit) (Feb 15, 2010)
- My previous 10/10 comment was posted before Chapters 3/4/5 and applies to Chapters 1 and 2.
There is an unwelcome move towards drug use and irreversible physical changes in part 5 in particular, which make this more a standard mainstream tale with an unusual beginning rather than a nice short story, maybe 8/10.
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