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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jun 20, 2010 |
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Almost quit after two sentences. I mean, you can't get much sillier than the descriptions therein. He knocked on the door, she opened the door, he stepped in. She hugs him and he hopes she doesn't feel he has a hard-on. Wtf? Shouldn't this be porn, I would have thought a 6 year old wrote those lines.
I fear that the rest of the story is up to the same standard. While there can be talk of a certain inventiveness, everything is written in such an off-hand, childlike way that I absolutely can't go higer than a thinnish five.
JJ (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
satincuffs
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Feb 22, 2010 |
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I have a weakness for any story that has creative and original bondage elements, the more detailed the better! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Willman1
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Feb 9, 2010 |
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A good start, now get to the action so I can really rate the story (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
SirPat45
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Feb 8, 2010 |
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Very nice start. I look forward to many more parts and hope they come soon. (9/10)
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