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Watch What You Ask For Author: J Lewis
(Added on Dec 17, 2009) (This month 26931 readers) (Total 38813 readers)

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Reviewer: JimmyJump (Edit) Rating: Jan 3, 2010
Last time I said that J Lewis had been thinking. I steel feel he has.
Although, now that there's three parts already, I can see the style is still the same. A bit more elaborate, storywise. More detail to the surroundings, maybe. Highly imaginative in any case.
Less staccato, more flowing sentences also.
Well defined characters in a well defined world, going towards an as yet undefined future.
The stoy may come across as a bit slow, sometimes. But that's because of the author taking his time to introduce the reader to all the aspects of the main characters' surroundings, behaviour and train of though. also because "Watch What You Ask For" is a story one should be able to read from start to finish, to take away the feeling of slowness.
But don't let that keep you from reading what's already posted, because you won't be didappointed...
JJ (9/10)

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