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Wheel Chair Cuckold
Author: Ned Stevenson
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(Added on Feb 13, 2002)
(This month 50890 readers) (Total 63626 readers) |
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Man borrows money from a loan shark based on his ability to pay it back, but then has a car accident and can't earn enough money to pay him back. The man sends two goons, to convince the man to pay or have his wife used as a slut by his son and his goons. He tries to fight it, but can't do much to prevent it from his wheel chair. The wife decides that if she's going to have to fuck these guys, that her husband is going to have to watch. Every time they fuck her, he's wheeled in and placed at the foot of the bed. Not too long and a really good cuckold story. |
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| Reviewer:
General_Dom
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Oct 7, 2005 |
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This starts out promising, but as soon as the bedroom scene starts it gets a little repetitive. I would have liked the man and his wife to put up more of a fight. You have some good, sadistic villains, but they need to have a bit more fun with their cruelty. I would have preferred the wife to take a bit more time before she begins to enjoy it (but that might be your preference, which I understand). One thing I would stay away from is the cutting back to the husband's interior dialogues. It kills the action. This is well written though, and I think you should keep it up. (6/10)
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masostud
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Jun 15, 2002 |
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Light tuff, a bit superficial and simple. (4/10)
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hyphen666
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Feb 13, 2002 |
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A bit on the depressing side, but the ending has enough uncertainty to merit approval. The grammar and overall proof-reading leaves something to be desired. I'd love to have a dime for every "site" instead of "sight" I've seen. The bottom line is that the author shows promise. (6/10)
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