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Jezebel in Hell
Author: Pirates Wench
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(Added on Jan 28, 2009)
(This month 22393 readers) (Total 39002 readers) |
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Girl goes backpacking alone and is taken captive by a man. He takes her to his cabin in the woods were he has a full dungeon set up in the basement. He forces her to endure all kinds of torments as part of her training in hopes of making her is perfect slave girl. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
PiratesWench
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Feb 18, 2009 |
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Hey! Thanks everyone for the reviews. I can’t respond to your messages for some reason. I get an error code. I tried to add codes both times I added a new chapter but there not showing up for some reason. Hey, at least I can add stories! :P (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
devot_und_geil
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Feb 15, 2009 |
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I have enjoyed reading it very much so far, and I would so much love to read more! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Feb 12, 2009 |
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Okay. So there's no codes. Some people seem to do searches based on codes, so they will miss out on this story. But, on the other hand, it's not like you're gonna get some weird disease when hitting a title without codes, is it.
I found this story to be of quality. Well written, although the concept isn't new. But then again, which concept is?
Pirates Wench took a beaten path, while Jezebel obviously didn't, which brought her to where she's at, namely her own private little hell.
Up until now, with the addition of a second part, everything fits. I only hope that new content will be as refreshing and that the male character doesn't turn out to be a walking, talking cliché.
So far, so very good.
JJ (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
diem
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Jan 31, 2009 |
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could be the start of something interesting and, yes, I'd suggest using codes in subsequent chapters. (7/10)
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notsofast
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Jan 31, 2009 |
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first chapter is promising. needs codes (8/10)
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