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Doctored Into A Cage
Author: Jackpot
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(Added on Nov 22, 2008)
(This month 117209 readers) (Total 177610 readers) |
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Dr. Melody Forbes is about to explore the world of sexual psychopath, Tara White. What will she find and how will she act? More importantly, will she survive? |
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| Reviewer:
madlax
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Mar 28, 2009 |
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Excellent story, great characters, and holds no punches, I hope Doctored into a Cage has many chapters to come as this has now become a firm favourite of mine, Thanks Jackpot (10/10)
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Pandora
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Mar 25, 2009 |
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I couldn't stop myself and read the entire thing in one setting! I sure hope you send in more soon. This is one hot story! (10/10)
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TOXIS
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Jan 19, 2009 |
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What an excellent story! Characters deftly sketched. Plot suggested but not promised. Cruel not to be kind, warped, but very intimate too. One of the best stories on the site. I hope that you give this story the very strong ending it deserves.
By the way, while some think it too quick in unfolding, I think it's a strength. Before there's a chance to pick the story apart, it's swept you along to some new thrill. I love the pacing of your tale. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
JimmyJump
(Edit) (Jan 20, 2009)
- I wasn't talking about the pacing of the story, I was referring to the rapidity with which a throroughbred psy is cunned by/keels over to the 'advances' of Tara. Granted, she (Tara) supposedly has special powers, but like I said, those powers should have kept her from falling into the clutches of the law... which makes the whole story shake on its foundations.
JJ
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mkemse
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Jan 19, 2009 |
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very well written (9/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jan 19, 2009 |
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Agree with iceblock below, that the plot moves along a tad too quickly. I would have liked to see more of a cat and mouse game between Tara and Dr Forbes, more of a batlle of wits/wills, so to speak.
The slight supernatural streak is intriguing and makes me wonder where that will lead, in terms of it being genuine or imagination.
All in all, a recommendable effort.
JJ (8/10)
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JimmyJump
(Edit) (Jan 19, 2009)
- I should have read the latest chapters before my review. The "slight supernatural streak" I mentioned before, seems to turn into some unmitigated voodoo bullshit, to the extent that when having those capacities, Tara would never have wound-up in Jail or an institiution in the first place.
Still, I'm gonna bear with the writer to see where he/she's taking us.
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| Reviewer:
suprvulcan
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Dec 1, 2008 |
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Loved the story line and hope you continue the story line. (10/10)
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jennyt256
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Nov 29, 2008 |
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I very much enjoyed the beginning chapter and i am looking forward to seeing how the plot develops. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Chuckdom19
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Nov 28, 2008 |
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A fine beginning. I hope you might lead us all into understanding of the means of her abilities, and develop the story further. It's really quite well-written and interesting. (8/10)
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iceblock
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Nov 28, 2008 |
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I loved the beginning of this story. While it moves a little too quickly for my liking, in terms of the murderer seducing her victim, it left me wanting more and looking forward to reading any future parts.
I also found parts of this story a little too unbelievable, yet to the author's credit this doesn't detract from the overall plot. Quite to the contrary, it leaves you wondering how the perpetrator manages what she does, does she have a plant in the facility for example? Hopefully all will be revealed in future parts.
I look forward to reading them. (8/10)
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