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A slut for Sir
Author: Purple Pixie
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(Added on Aug 13, 2008)
(This month 19303 readers) (Total 28939 readers) |
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This is the story of Karen, a forty something, divorcee, who felt life was passing her by, meeting a man from an internet dating site seemed an exciting proposition, little did she know upon meeting him, just how her life would change, how he would own her, control her, bend will to his every whim, until she was trained to serve him in a manner that only a true slut can. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
npatek
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Aug 20, 2008 |
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I like your story very much. The seduction of a mature woman, which she can't stand, is well told. How she is dominated via phone. The emotions you describe are realistic. I would like to read a lot more about sluts daily life. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
masterdw
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Aug 17, 2008 |
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Yes the writing could be better, but a good read anyway (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
suzy9
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Aug 17, 2008 |
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i liked the content and would like to read more of the story. But i must say the text format was a little difficult to read. (7/10)
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elprof
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Aug 16, 2008 |
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This is the beginning of what could be a very good story of how a mature woman becomes a submissive slut. Unfortunately, for those of us who care, the paragraphing and use of appropriate punctuation, especially when conversation is involved as much as it is here, is pretty awful. It is bad to the point where it hinders the reader. (5/10)
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