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Inside The Mind of Dr. Agnes O'Brien
Author: E. E. Norcod
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(Added on Jul 2, 2008)
(This month 68250 readers) (Total 86264 readers) |
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A rif on the characters created by Steve Pervy in his "Its All In The Mind" stories but with the darker overtones of E.E. Norcod. In this short story Steve and Dave take leave of their usual activities and uncork the mind of the Foundress and Headmistress of the St. Margaret's School. |
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| Reviewer:
pauljones
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Sep 6, 2008 |
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Dull. Predictable. Stolen from another author. Please write your own stuff for a change, stop being lazy. (4/10)
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redwrangler
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Jul 11, 2008 |
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I read the whole story this is based on. This was a juicy start. I hope to see the girls experience an american wooden paddle in their new school. Perhaps a tampon hanging between their legs would add realism. I anxiously await the darker side you are so good at bringing out. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Stevepervy
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Jul 11, 2008 |
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It's certainly not easy to develop characters and story lines written by another author. My congratulations to E.E. Norcod on a good job. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
theroadtoad
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Jul 8, 2008 |
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This is an excellent story. It is intellectual as well as sexual - a very good combination. I highly reccommend it and hope we get more chapters soon. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Jul 8, 2008 |
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Occasionally I am forced to come up from the basement by a story that deserves my attention. This is one of those occasions. If you are into depravity wth style and grace this one's for you. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Stevepervy
(Edit) (Jul 11, 2008)
- I'm not being precious at all, but I am disappointed that someone who reviews so frequently would post comments on this story, but not on my original on which it is based!
- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Jul 12, 2008)
- In the last three years I have reviewed twelve (12) stories, which belies your comment about my frequent reviews. In this particular case I am very familiar with Norcod's work and was delighted to see that he had not lost his way over the years. Don't take the lack of a review from this semi-retired reviewer as a slight; none was intended.
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