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Denial
Author: Conquered
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(Added on Dec 30, 2007)
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A wife decides to curtail her husband's sexual demands with sexual denial and a chastity device. Though he doesn't realize it, it's only the beginning. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
austerud
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Feb 5, 2008 |
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I love his slow descent into sexual slavery and look forward to more. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
conquered
(Edit) (Mar 4, 2008)
- Thank you! I loved writing it, and will keep the chapters coming!
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| Reviewer:
Loki47
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Feb 5, 2008 |
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I really enjoyed this story. I look for just this kind of story and thought it was well-written and held my interest. I look forward to reading more chapters soon. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
conquered
(Edit) (Mar 4, 2008)
- Thanks for your comment!! I'm glad it works for you too ;)
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| Reviewer:
kinkcrazy
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Jan 4, 2008 |
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Very well written (9/10)
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- Replied by:
conquered
(Edit) (Mar 4, 2008)
- Sweet of you to say! Thank you. It was inspired by some actual events in my life!
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| Reviewer:
Nemz
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Jan 1, 2008 |
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The story has a good beginning, telling how the relationship between his wife and himself developed. A good light read that's entertaining, but not very fulfilling. Then again, the story itself is about nonfulfillment. If there are any more chapters after the first I would suggest more detail, both in the general story and in the dialog. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
conquered
(Edit) (Mar 5, 2008)
- Thank you for your comment and suggestions. I hope you find the rest of the story enjoyable!
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 1, 2008 |
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althou not gneneral my type of story, it was hot (9/10)
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- Replied by:
conquered
(Edit) (Mar 4, 2008)
- Thank you! I hope you like progression of the story!
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| Reviewer:
trainmanretep
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Dec 31, 2007 |
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Great concept. The dialog maybe could stand a little "polish" but overall a great story. Looking forward to the next chapter (9/10)
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- Replied by:
conquered
(Edit) (Mar 4, 2008)
- Thank you for your kind comments! I try to present it as "finished" as I can, but you do have to say "It's done!" eventually, and send it out to the world. Hope you like the rest of it!
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