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The Seductive Master
Author: Unknown
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(Added on Nov 22, 2001)
(This month 52094 readers) (Total 70110 readers) |
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Every girls was talking about this secret master. You just couldn't wait to be picked by him and became his slave girl. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Mar 5, 2007 |
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well writen and thought through, flows smoothly (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
boccaccio2000g
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Aug 24, 2002 |
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Pretty good story; quite well written but a little formulaic. Have to disagree with Mitch -- I don't think the relationship between the characters is all that believable -- would you "sign up" to be the slave of someone you hardly know? Then again, this IS Fantasyland, isn't it? (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
mitch348
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Nov 28, 2001 |
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The interaction between the characters is very believable. My sub just loved the entire story because many of the torments are similar to what I do to her. (10/10)
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