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Anthropology
Author: Freddie Clegg
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(Added on Aug 12, 2007)
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Dr. Karen Armstrong is studying a culture where women are treated as slaves and then finds she becomes a part of it. |
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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Aug 19, 2007 |
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different type of story and concept, well done (10/10)
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- Replied by:
freddie_clegg
(Edit) (Aug 20, 2007)
- Thanks, I try to "ring the changes" - glad you're enjoying it.
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| Reviewer:
bmtphoenix
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Aug 16, 2007 |
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Very good. Looking forward to more, and for now will satisfy myself by going and reading Market Forces. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
freddie_clegg
(Edit) (Aug 20, 2007)
- Thanks for the score. I aim to post another chunk this week, although it will take a few days to appear as always. I hope you enjoy Market Forces, its quite a substantial story - this one won't be as long!
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bmtphoenix
(Edit) (Sep 24, 2007)
- Second part is almost as good as the first, though I was kind of put off by the "Oh, by the way, Karen is a lesbian" thing. Not that it was badly written, just that even if she were a lesbian she wouldn't have been so sexually receptive in that situation.
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freddie_clegg
(Edit) (Nov 9, 2007)
- Fair criticism, BMT. I guess I was trying for a bit of relief after the rather brutal scenes earlier but I guess I could have done this differently and made it more credible.
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Aug 16, 2007 |
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Excellent start told with a polish that shines through. Looking forward to more. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
freddie_clegg
(Edit) (Nov 8, 2007)
- Hey - I just realised I didn't post to thank you for this review. I hope you enjoyed the rest of the tale.
- Replied by:
freddie_clegg
(Edit) (Nov 8, 2007)
- Hey - I just realised I didn't post to thank you for this review. I hope you enjoyed the rest of the tale.
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| Reviewer:
csr
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Aug 15, 2007 |
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I really enjoyed this and look forward to more. Your work is great, but this one promises to be my favourite. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
freddie_clegg
(Edit) (Aug 15, 2007)
- Thanks for your review & the great score! There will be more to come soon.
- Replied by:
freddie_clegg
(Edit) (Aug 15, 2007)
- Thanks for your review and the score. Don't worry there is more to come - I hope it lives up to the first part!
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| Reviewer:
newwmember
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Aug 14, 2007 |
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Congratulations - this is a very good one,I hope that there will be further installments, and that your stay in the hospital will go over without any troubles for you
(10/10)
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- Replied by:
freddie_clegg
(Edit) (Aug 14, 2007)
- Thanks for your review, glad you're enjoying it. I hope to be out of hospital fairly swiftly - at least it will give me the chance to indulge my fetish for nurses. :-) I'm going to try to post another chunk before I go in.
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| Reviewer:
gnuman
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Aug 14, 2007 |
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I enjoy Freddie's writing. Market Forces was very well written and had good character development with several different plot lines.
This appears to be off to a better start. The writing is better. The character development is good. The story is more patient and promises to be better.
I look forward to how the story develops. I also hope that he keeps the story from going off on too many tangents to highlight Freddie's creative imagination. A 10 or 12 chapter book would be preferable to the very long Market Forces (which I enjoyed, but grew tired of). (9/10)
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- Replied by:
gnuman
(Edit) (Aug 14, 2007)
- I should have said parts not chapters above. Pardon my mistake. The chapters are short, the parts are long.
- Replied by:
freddie_clegg
(Edit) (Aug 14, 2007)
- Gnuman, thanks for this. I'm glad you're enjoying it. If I'm honest Market Forces went on for longer than I planned. Even I was getting a bit tired of it by the end but it spawned some interesting spin-offs, including this one. Rest assured it's nothing like as long - I'm aiming for around 20 chapters posted in four or five parts.
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