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Here at Last Author: canz
(Added on Aug 10, 2007) (This month 9794 readers) (Total 16913 readers)
A mature, heterosexual couple meet in realtime at last.

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Reviewer: bmtphoenix (Edit) Rating: Aug 13, 2007
Good story, but missing a lot of description. You keep making allusions to her being "mature," but never mention her age. There's very little description about her at all. Also kind of weird how it's like he's talking to her but not. It had me waiting for some sort of twist that never came. (7/10)
Replied by: canz (Edit) (Aug 13, 2007)
I'm glad you like the story, but surely maturity is more an attitude of mind than it is a chronological event. "Here at Last" was originally an audio product; a gift to Holly, who is real, and already knows what she looks like! Also, I do at one point describe her body as being magnificent. What more needs to be said?

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