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Tali's Troubles
Author: justin benedict
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(Added on Aug 3, 2007)
(This month 52777 readers) (Total 59192 readers) |
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Tali's Master puts her through quite an afternoon! And that's only after what she went through with Canin' Connie! |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 23, 2009 |
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was a great read (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Aug 4, 2007 |
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A good start, but I have to say that the beginning where you make every sentence a paragraph was very annoying! Clean up the next part and I will be happy to raise your score. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
GwaiLo
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Aug 4, 2007 |
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Great!
I am always looking forward to Tali stories.
Thanks for writing this Justin. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Aug 3, 2007 |
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It was cute. Funny in a nicely mean spirited kind of way and has some real potential. Try to keep going. (7/10)
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