|
|
|
|
|
The Virgin
Author: bmtphoenix
|
| |
(Added on Jul 21, 2007)
(This month 53734 readers) (Total 71053 readers) |
| |
A woman saved herself for her husband until she was 21 years old. Unfortunately her boyfriends along the way didn't see her as virtous... |
| Ratings and Reviews: |
| Number
of Ratings: 3 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
| 1 |
2 |
3 |
4 |
5 |
6 |
7 |
8 |
9 |
10 |
| 0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
33% |
67% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
|
Weighed
Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7/10) |
| Highest
Rating: (7/10) |
Lowest
Rating:  (6/10) |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
mkemse
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Jan 9, 2009 |
| |
was worth the time to read (7/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
chksng19
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Jul 24, 2007 |
| |
Not a bad concept, and a decent twist at the end. Literate and correct, but I have to agree with HCA before me... something is missing. I believe it is the response of the victim, and also in the pleasure of the torturers. It does not seem to equal the levels of pain and pleasure experienced. (7/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
bmtphoenix
(Edit) (Jul 29, 2007)
- Ok, I'll keep that in mind. Maybe I was just in a dour mood when I wrote that one...
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Jul 21, 2007 |
| |
I should have found this story very exciting. Your writing isn't bad, but for some reason the story just misses the mark and I cannot put my finger on why. (6/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
bmtphoenix
(Edit) (Jul 29, 2007)
- Well, I liked it! Thanks for the honest feedback though.
|
|
|
About 