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Caroline's Realm
Author: Euryleia Rider
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(Added on Jul 12, 2007)
(This month 104273 readers) (Total 149048 readers) |
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Wealthy, dominating woman takes in penniless relation. |
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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Martiniman
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Jan 12, 2012 |
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This is a fabulous story & a must read! (10/10)
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Euryleia
(Edit) (Jan 24, 2012)
- Thanks, I'm very happy you enjoyed the tale!
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| Reviewer:
Juventino
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May 28, 2010 |
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Congratulations, a very good story, it worked well and entertained and aroused.
just as the story slowed down it changed direction and was refreshed. i look forward to reading more of you're tales.
I would however add i would have liked a bit more about when it is set and where, but im don't think that matters too much in a erotic story some im not counting in the rating. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Euryleia
(Edit) (Jun 23, 2010)
- Thanks for letting me know that the story worked for you.
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| Reviewer:
dadisch
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Nov 24, 2007 |
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A super story. There are not enough good lesbian stories around, but this ranks with the best. I love the way Harriet was seduced & encouraged, forced to submit & eventually submitting fully. I would have liked to see a bit more caning perhaps, but her receipt of 50 strokes was very good. First cless Euryleia. Any more in the pipeline? (Not animal though!). (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Euryleia
(Edit) (Nov 24, 2007)
- Thanks for the great feedback. I appreciate you letting me know what works.
There actually is a spanking story that I've sent off for posting. Hopefully, you'll see it soon.
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| Reviewer:
RiverOtter
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Sep 14, 2007 |
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I like this one; the bondage is serious but not cruel, and the story progresses at a nice pace. It has an old fashioned Victorian flavor that I find appealing. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Euryleia
(Edit) (Jul 27, 2007)
- I'm glad you like it and that you reviewed it.
There are four more parts that I'm finishing up to post.
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Logic1
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Sep 10, 2007 |
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nicely written story with great characters and nicely paced. I do like your writing because it has a good flow to it and seems to lack the usual spelling and other mistakes you see so often.
You could use some more "descriptions" if you know what I mean but that is just a minor thing in such a great story.
(9/10)
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- Replied by:
Euryleia
(Edit) (Sep 10, 2007)
- Thanks so much for the review and positive rating.
Thanks to all the feedback, I am really working on the description thing on my new tale.
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| Reviewer:
SensoryOverlord
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Sep 5, 2007 |
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Excellent! From the wonderfully no-nonsense opening onwards, this story is a treat. Both characters are well developed, and the mood of the period is well done. My only complaint would be that Harriet's frustrations are underemphasised, and some opportunities for extra humiliation seem to be missed. (Who ever heard of religious fanatics who _don't_ demonstrate massive hypocrisy, by sexually abusing their captive? I mean really...) (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Euryleia
(Edit) (Sep 5, 2007)
- Thanks so much for the review. I'll be sure and research some religious humiliations for my next tale. <vbg>
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| Reviewer:
FlameDesire
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Aug 8, 2007 |
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This is a wonderful story that I came across. I had ignored it before when I saw it on the update page when I skim through, but after a few updates of not so good f/f stories I decided to check out this one.
From chapter 1 I wasn't sure whether to go on or not. I continued on to chapter 2 out of boredom and was captivated...I kept reading and reading until the end.It's a magnificent story that was very hot and sexy. The humiliation was well done, but didn't go insanely too far which receives a thumbs up from me. Teasing was awesome and the sex scenes were detailed, but far from boring. There wasn't long term orgasm denial which caught my eye as well.
Dialog is done so wonderfully. It's a really smooth write without many mistakes. I could have done without that instruction session...eh, didn't really need that Max guy to pull down his pants. The plot is wonderful, but Harriet wasn't one of those insane sex machines. She was given food and cared for which I found more realistic.
The dog thing wasn't really what I expected, but you made it not so much dog like...It was a short part, but definitely well done.The caning had me so hot for some reason, but I definitely liked that her cousin did give her 50 instead of cutting off. She's really a strict, but not a cruel Mistress which I really liked.
It's written so beautifully, it's almost perfect.
There's so much more to say, but in the end, I just really like this story and it really made me wet xP (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Euryleia
(Edit) (Aug 9, 2007)
- Thanks for the review. I'm very glad that you perservered past the first part (and past Max's penis). I'm pleased the story made you wet.
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| Reviewer:
pbugler
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Aug 6, 2007 |
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I have to agree with the previous reviews - this is a magnificient piece of Victoriana [although I don't think the period is mentioned it has all the wonderful flavour of a Victorian, or perhaps Edwardian piece]. The story is wonderfully crafted and the writing is excellent. As others have said, the way in which the humiliation is teased out is terrific. Well done Euryleia!
All one can add is - more please, more! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Euryleia
(Edit) (Aug 6, 2007)
- I really appreciate your feedback and encouragement. It means a lot to me. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
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Night Writer
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Aug 5, 2007 |
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An absolutely wonderful story! The characters were perfectly drawn, and the dialog several notches above what I usually expect. There is a certain sophistication of author and craft that shines through from the very first paragraph. Subtle, but detailed enough to coax my imagination into play. "Show, don't tell" is written all over this piece. Thanks for this - I've mined a real gem, and have added it to my collection. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Euryleia
(Edit) (Aug 6, 2007)
- Thank you very much for the rave review. It pleases me that I've created something that brings the reader's imagination along with me.
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| Reviewer:
RhondaLee
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Jul 31, 2007 |
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very well written, very nicely done (10/10)
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Euryleia
(Edit) (Jul 31, 2007)
- Thank you so much for the review. I'm glad you're enjoying the story and I appreciate you taking the time to review it.
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| Reviewer:
KSCouple4SLV
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Jul 30, 2007 |
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Very well written. The characters came to life for me and I felt myself drawn into the story and wanting to read more and more. Can't wait for it to continue. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Euryleia
(Edit) (Jul 30, 2007)
- Thanks so much for the positive feedback. I've sent off another part to be posted and there are at least two more after that.
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| Reviewer:
Aaeru
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Jul 27, 2007 |
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Brilliant story! I hadn't written a review yet but for this I felt that I simpyl had to do it. I tend to read stories from this site quite slowly but not thia time, I was so pleasantly suprised when the new two chapters appeared yesterday and devoured them as soon as possible.
I really like the characterisation, even insignifican maids have somewhat distinct personalities and Caroline is a great mistress - stern but also flexible. The way she behaves and especially the way she speaks really fits a wicked Lady as it should. (10/10)
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Euryleia
(Edit) (Jul 27, 2007)
- Thanks, Aaeru. I'm very pleased you like the story so much and I appreciate the lovely review. Caroline has been great fun to write.
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| Reviewer:
msnaughtygrrl
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Jul 25, 2007 |
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absolutely YUMMIE! You've had me from the opening stanza ... Caroline is so deliciously wicked and a truely expert Mistress ... lucky Harriet doesn't stand a chance. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Euryleia
(Edit) (Jul 25, 2007)
- Thank you so much for the review. I'm glad you're enjoying the tale. Further parts should be up soon.
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| Reviewer:
Iphigenia fan
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Jul 17, 2007 |
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One of the few stories that really captures the feeling of humiliation perfectly. The dialogue was excellent, the build up well-paced. Looking forward to the next installment. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Euryleia
(Edit) (Jul 17, 2007)
- Thank you so much for the review. I've sent off the second part and hope to see it up soon.
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| Reviewer:
ElectricBadger
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Jul 14, 2007 |
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Great work, good flow and nice scenes. Don't shy away from describing things a bit more, though; the slave's feelings, what the maids look like, etc. The final scene, with the demonstration, was a really great innovation -- but was glossed over! Thanks again for sharing, and I look forward to seeing more! (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Euryleia
(Edit) (Jul 14, 2007)
- Thank you for the feedback. I will go back over the story and add more descriptions as I write the further chapters.
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| Reviewer:
Lady`Sapphire
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Jul 13, 2007 |
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Very well written, excellent pacing, wonderful characterization, one of the best I've read in a long, long time. Looking forward to more. (9/10)
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Euryleia
(Edit) (Jul 14, 2007)
- Thank you for wonderful review. I appreciate you reading and taking the time to respond.
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| Reviewer:
watson
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Jul 13, 2007 |
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This is wonderful...the descriptions of Caroline's psychological struggle and gradual reorientation are excellent. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Euryleia
(Edit) (Jul 14, 2007)
- Thank you for the review. I'm hoping to continue her struggle in the later chapters.
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| Reviewer:
WyldWyl
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Jul 13, 2007 |
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A very promising beginning. Nicely descriptive, good character insights and an interesting ideas and a fun period of history to work in. Very well done. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Euryleia
(Edit) (Jul 14, 2007)
- Thank you for the feedback. I'm glad the time period is as fun for others to read about as it was to write a story of power dynamics.
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Jul 12, 2007 |
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Nicely written and progressing well in the story. Good look into character's thoughts and feelings. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Euryleia
(Edit) (Jul 14, 2007)
- Thank you for review. I appreciate the feedback.
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