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Pilloried
Author: Rhabbi
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(Added on Jul 4, 2007)
(This month 64552 readers) (Total 82488 readers) |
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A Mediterranean trip goes bad for a group of women on a themed cruise |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
H Dean
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Jul 7, 2007 |
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This is a solid tale of woe that begs for more. I would encourage you to continue this tale, despite your admited difficulties, in the same POV. I would very much enjoy reading how this story plays out and the suffering this girl is to be put through.
Stylistically, this story could be handled a bit better. Sentences tended towards the choppy and descriptions that would have livened it a bit were omitted.
Otherwise, as an entre that promises to be more, this was an excellent beginning. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
hoodedandmasked
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Jul 5, 2007 |
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Thank you - I was left wanting more (and feeling a little jealous!) (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Rhabbi
(Edit) (Jul 5, 2007)
- I appreciate that you like the story. It was the hardest story I ever wrote, and as such not sure I will ever come back and finish, unless I change the POV.
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