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Pilloried Author: Rhabbi
(Added on Jul 4, 2007) (This month 60756 readers) (Total 78692 readers)
A Mediterranean trip goes bad for a group of women on a themed cruise

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Weighed Average (?): (7.5/10)
Average Rating: (8.5/10)
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Reviewer: H Dean (Edit) Rating: Jul 7, 2007
This is a solid tale of woe that begs for more. I would encourage you to continue this tale, despite your admited difficulties, in the same POV. I would very much enjoy reading how this story plays out and the suffering this girl is to be put through.
Stylistically, this story could be handled a bit better. Sentences tended towards the choppy and descriptions that would have livened it a bit were omitted.
Otherwise, as an entre that promises to be more, this was an excellent beginning. (8/10)

Reviewer: hoodedandmasked (Edit) Rating: Jul 5, 2007
Thank you - I was left wanting more (and feeling a little jealous!) (9/10)
Replied by: Rhabbi (Edit) (Jul 5, 2007)
I appreciate that you like the story. It was the hardest story I ever wrote, and as such not sure I will ever come back and finish, unless I change the POV.

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