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    Graces' fall
    
    Author: Fred~
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    (Added on Jun 28, 2007)
            (This month 55114 readers) (Total 72675 readers) | 
   
   
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    Young mother begins descent into submission | 
   
 
 
   
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    Average 
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    Highest 
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    Lowest 
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    | Reviewer: 
    csr
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    Sep 5, 2007 | 
   
   
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        Looks like a great start--can't wait to see where you go with this! (8/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
    Bound and Gagging
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    Jul 9, 2007 | 
   
   
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        Though it is a short beginning, I really enjoyed this story.  I'd really like to see some more! (9/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
    Perdurabo Joery
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    Jul 3, 2007 | 
   
   
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        Although it's indeed only a smaal beginning I think it is well written and very promising (9/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
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    Jul 2, 2007 | 
   
   
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        Good start, looking forward to more details in the next episode (7/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
    joseph501
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    Jun 29, 2007 | 
   
   
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        I enjoyed reading the story. (10/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
    mkemse
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    Jun 28, 2007 | 
   
   
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        god start but you need to add more to make areal good judgment, just not enough there yet (7/10) 
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