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Sleep Well Bitch
Author: srone
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(Added on Jun 19, 2007)
(This month 52776 readers) (Total 66893 readers) |
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A husband is put in his cage for the night |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Salvatore334
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Feb 14, 2012 |
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Excellent story...I love the contrast between his pain and her comfort. She's great.
The formatting complaints seems silly since you can just copy and paste... (10/10)
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- Replied by:
srone
(Edit) (Feb 18, 2012)
- Wow...I thought all of my stories had drifted off to oblivion. I seriously didn't think people were still reading them.
Thanks for the review!
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| Reviewer:
abitbent
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Jun 24, 2007 |
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Fantastic... Erotically descriptive. The author does a tremendous job of letting the reader become part of the main character's thoughts. I never thought describing a single night in a cage, with no story or plot at all, could have been so erotically written. I hope this author will write more.. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
srone
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Jun 21, 2007 |
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Thanks for all of the acalaids and constructive criticism. I'm not sure why the formating was the way it was. I uploaded a Word file, no different then my previous story. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
H Dean
(Edit) (Jun 21, 2007)
- Save the word file as an html document instead and then upload the file. That will help the formatting problem.
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| Reviewer:
sissychar
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Jun 21, 2007 |
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SO torturous! SO arousing and i can only hope that there are subbies out there that live that life. Thank you. (10/10)
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Rocky
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Jun 20, 2007 |
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I'm not sure that the formatting issue is the fault of the author; there have been complaints about formatting with one of my stories as well, and I never was able to figure out what the problem was. That said, the story was okay but not great. If you do a re-write, try being a little more descriptive of both the physical scene and the thoughts and emotions of the characters involved. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Jun 20, 2007 |
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Formatting was bad. I too had to copy and paste it to read it. The plot itself is not bad and with a little work could be an excellent story. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
trainmanretep
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Jun 20, 2007 |
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I agree, the format is bad. I copied and pasted it into word for easier reading. Needs a little more "polish" otherwise nicely done, the way you describe the various thoughts going through your mind as you are locked up and suffering. I think a sequel should include a Lover's visit while you are locked up and out of the way. Just think how much more painful it will be when you hear your Mistress yelling as orgasm after orgasm racks Her body. Something you have never been able to give to Her. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
JaeJae
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Jun 19, 2007 |
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it was good, but should have used the ENTER key. Scrolling across the screen to finish a sentence was annoying. Redo how the story is set up typing wise and it would be a LOT better. (6/10)
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