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Supper's Ready
Author: velvetglove
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(Added on May 20, 2007)
(This month 49660 readers) (Total 53070 readers) |
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A collection of five short poems. They have a BDSM theme but they are light-hearted and should only take you a minute or two to read. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Feb 8, 2009 |
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velvetlove velvetglove
thrashing bashing gruesome bites of love
crawling falling reeling wailing
calling mummy ailing tummy
on the waves of pain we're sailing
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flashing crashing shores are breaking
pleasure's nigh it's all we're akin
swimming webtide ebtide uptight
round we go and come up darkside
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feel the sting a pleasure fling
when mystic ladies wanton sing
lushly viciously granting fill
fortelling lifeblood's draining spill
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JJ (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
crickette
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May 24, 2007 |
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I do not believe that I have ever read anything by you before so this is a 1st. I did enjoy the poetry and tame or not, it does get one thinking and that is half the battle. (7/10)
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