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A Special Relationship
Author: velvetglove
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(Added on Apr 9, 2007)
(This month 67332 readers) (Total 91366 readers) |
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A (long, single-part) story of an Anglo-American relationship, involving a submissive British woman whose boundaries are pushed to their very limit by her younger dominant boyfriend during one turbulent weekend. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Feb 8, 2009 |
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I must say I don't like the Twist either. I mean, it's a silly dance, really. Makes your knees and ankles squeek and turns yer butt to jelly.
The story on the other hand, is, well, a different story. I myself (who else?) found the tale to be very realistic, in that it would be feasable to lead a life like Toni's.
Okay, so Toni seems to be on a slippery slope that can only lead to a humiliating and disgraceful fate, but hey, who are we to stop her?
In a nutshell, "A Special Relationship" is, indeed, very special, because velvetglove succeeded in presenting us with a greatly crafted and well-molded lead character, who's devoted, if not to George, at least to her submissive streak, while at the same time keeping a rather sober head and adding some believable rationalising.
Sometimes it seems like George is going a tad too far, but you'd be amazed at what people are willing to go through, or are willing to do unto others in the knowledge that there won't be any, or faint resistance.
Also, in reality, when folks stumble across a pervy side of people they know, they usually don't speak about it, or simply deny the whole thing, out of fear to also being seen as 'deviates'...
As far as velvetglove is concerned, as a writer I hold him/her (it?) in high esteem. And while we might not be staring along Lake Geneva's shoreline here, using Deep Purple's "Smoke On The Water" as a cell-phone jingle only proves that velvetglove also has Taste.
JJ (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
FootSlaveE
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Aug 11, 2007 |
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I really enjoyed this story and am looking forward to the update. Thought, I must say, like other reviewers, I didn't really enjoy the twist. Perhaps, with a second chapter, the twist will seem less strange...either way, great job! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
velvetglove
(Edit) (Aug 12, 2007)
- Hi Footslave, glad you liked this story too. I plan to post the follow up story by end August. To be honest, I regret the twist in this story but, hey, I guess we've all done things we regret.
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| Reviewer:
npatek
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Apr 14, 2007 |
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I like your story very much. It is intense but still hardly realistic and with a lot of direct speech. The toilet duty is a nice idea. The end with the student group is a little shoal. But very good work. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
C_Lakewood
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Apr 11, 2007 |
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Intense and well-written. I'm not sure that the
twist is completely believable, but so what? (9/10)
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- Replied by:
velvetglove
(Edit) (Apr 12, 2007)
- Lakewood, your Review history is as entertaining as most good stories ! Thanks for your review and rating. I agree the twist stretches credibility but it enabled me to plot a sequel which I may write sometime.
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