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The Bus to Slavery
Author: Razor7826
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(Added on Mar 27, 2007)
(This month 48405 readers) (Total 96375 readers) |
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Three sisters are on the way home from their parent's funeral when their car breaks down. They hitch a ride back to town with a charter bus for a BDSM club that has no intentions of letting the gorgeous girls escape. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 2, 2008 |
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nice read but as 1 reviewer said more detail would have been nice (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
BruceCC
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Jun 17, 2007 |
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Nice Story. Not as much detail as I'd like, but overall quite good. I'm looking forward to reading more from this author. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Razor7826
(Edit) (Sep 20, 2008)
- Though it appears you aren't in the business of reviewing much nowadays, I've written many more stories for the site. If you have the time, would you mind reading and reviewing them?
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| Reviewer:
just_annie
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May 5, 2007 |
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Very good story, nice read. Parts 3 and 4 started showing multiple spelling and grammar errors. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
tbear4759
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Apr 1, 2007 |
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I'll wait to see what more is written before I give a higher score. a decent start. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
Razor7826
(Edit) (Apr 1, 2007)
- Parts 2, 3, and 4, are just waiting to be added to the site.
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Razor7826
(Edit) (Sep 17, 2007)
- So, now that the story is done, interested in giving a final review?
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| Reviewer:
susankarl
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Mar 29, 2007 |
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Delightful start. Please don't leave it too long before letting us know what misfortune befalls the recently bereaved. Susan. (6/10)
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- Replied by:
Razor7826
(Edit) (Mar 29, 2007)
- I have several more parts of the story finished, as well as a side story that I plan on writing as a single, large story instead of episodic like this one.
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chksng19
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Mar 29, 2007 |
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A great start, an interesting method to begin an old subject. Nice that you got a fresh idea, hope you can keep it going! (8/10)
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