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Rhonda\'s punishment
Author: MHCurtis
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(Added on Mar 2, 2007)
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gf\'s sister is a little bitch and needs an attitude adjustment |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
metoo
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Mar 21, 2007 |
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definitely want to hear the rest.......... (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
MsMonica_1
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Mar 3, 2007 |
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I hardly noticed the change in font because the story is hot! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Mar 3, 2007 |
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There are many ways to write, and some make it easier to read. Try to avoid calling someone by name all the time. "Malone, do this" and Malone did it. Hard to read, OK? "Malone do this" and he did it. Easier. Work on making your writing sound the way you would say it out loud, if you were reading the story to someone. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Lee Boudine
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Mar 2, 2007 |
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An excellent start to an account I eagerly wait to read.
I too was distracted by the change in font, but the thrust of the plot was more important: it caught my interest. Write on in whatever font you want. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Mar 2, 2007 |
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you need to use the same font all the way throught, part is real dark and the spacing is not real good (5/10)
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