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Becky\'s Taken
Author: Becky Campbell
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(Added on Feb 17, 2007)
(This month 64167 readers) (Total 89901 readers) |
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Professional woman abducted, bound and sexually abused. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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dreemgyrl86
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Mar 4, 2007 |
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oh, your story was very exciting and made this gyrl juice! great action. please write more and more! (9/10)
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DeGrinch
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Feb 21, 2007 |
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Thank you for this story. Well written, easy to read, good story line. Hope you will give us more of the same. (9/10)
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heycarrieanne
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Feb 20, 2007 |
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I thought your story was good. I appreciated all of the details. It would have been nice to know why the guy kidnapped her. The only problem I found was that your dialogue seemed a bit stilted at times. (7/10)
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dennisthmn
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Feb 20, 2007 |
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very good. look forward to your next story (9/10)
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H Dean
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Feb 19, 2007 |
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A bit short, but quite good overall. A few mistakes here and there, but nothing that would halt any but the pickiest of readers. A little more creativity in your choice of wording might have brought this story up a few notches. That is the worst I can say about this tale. Otherwise, we need more authors like yourself on this site. (8/10)
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La Toya
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Feb 18, 2007 |
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Will there be a second chapter? You seem to set it up, like you are thinking about. (8/10)
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Snark
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Feb 17, 2007 |
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Very enjoyable. Nice tension and descriptions. Could easily be lengthened beyond the brief encounter, though Becky proably thinks it's too long!
Interesting finish, ripe for a second chapter. (8/10)
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