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Plastique Surgery
Author: Darqside
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(Added on Feb 17, 2007)
(This month 65413 readers) (Total 88157 readers) |
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Roger Vaincroft, brilliant plastic surgeon, gets revenge on the woman who cost him his career! |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
ThisGirl
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Mar 6, 2007 |
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Awesome concept well-executed, Darqside! Very creative idea, and great use of humiliation on a very complex level!
Great suspenseful build-up in the beginning, I was on the edge of my seat, actually feeling fearful myself!
I liked the bits of humor thrown in as well.
Normally something I find hackneyed and distracting from the feel of a story, your dialogue was instead impressively well-written and read very naturally, playing well into the scene's mood.
I might have liked to see the title of the girl's new career used less frequently- when the antagonist initially said it the first time, it was very hot, however it seemed to become overused after that.
Similarly, I also would have preferred a somewhat slower descent into our female victim's ending mindset. You did a great job on the physical descriptions, and I would have enjoyed reading a deeper exploration of her internal struggle.
Great job, Darqside! Thank you so much for sharing and I hope there's more to come! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
ultimatesubbie
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Feb 20, 2007 |
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Not usually a fan of latex but well done. (7/10)
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cala
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Feb 19, 2007 |
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A rather well written sci-fi-esque story. (9/10)
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chksng19
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Feb 19, 2007 |
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Now THERE is a new story, new in concept and in execution! I do believe you've created a monster, sir. More, please. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Feb 18, 2007 |
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well concieved, flows well great theme (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Hot2nite
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Feb 17, 2007 |
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I thought it was very creative and enjoyed it. I would recommend others to read it. (9/10)
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