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Weighed
Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7/10) |
Highest
Rating:  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Kira
(Edit) |
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Mar 11, 2007 |
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Very interesting story, would like to see an continuing soon. Like the idea of circumcision the clit in combination with the growing.
But there is still more possible, waiting for it. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
barbod
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Feb 25, 2007 |
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Whilst some of the grammer and spelling needs looking at, I didn't find it as bad as the previous reviewer - before you submit the next part (and I hope you do) re-read it all - don't just spell check it to check to see that it makes sense. You have the makings of a good story here, so persevere and keep writing. Definately worth more than a '4' (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Feb 21, 2007 |
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CroBob? Your story just cries out for a good editor. That individual could help you not use "quite" for "quiet", and conquer several other writing demons for you.
Your story does show some hope, as your descriptions are good in the retelling of this old story idea. I hope you try again.
2/20 "Part one update" should have included a trip through your dictionary, friend. Spelling demons and wrong words getting worse.
The story is moving along, though. (4/10)
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