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The Sacrifice Author: hurt me
(Added on Jan 12, 2007) (This month 14141 readers) (Total 26618 readers)
A young girl must sacrifice herself to ensure a good harvest for the coming year.

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Weighed Average (?): (6.5/10)
Average Rating: (7/10)
Highest Rating: (8/10)
Lowest Rating: (6/10)

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Reviewer: JonMaddux (Edit) Rating: Jan 14, 2007
I would agree with lews, more character developement would have been nice but i suspect you were looking for a quick short randy tale. It was a bit brutal with her death but in historical context it was acceptable, i wouldnt have said that if she were hacked in half by the priests. Not bad over all. (7/10)

Reviewer: chksng19 (Edit) Rating: Jan 13, 2007
A fair tale, somewhat short on developing the character. (6/10)

Reviewer: Mad Lews (Edit) Rating: Jan 12, 2007
Cruel and crude, just as advertised. The historic details are left vauge, but that isn't the point of the story anyway. A little more emotional depth from the victim might have enlivened the story. Overall a good read for those who've read the warning codes and choose to press on.
(8/10)

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