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The Sacrifice
Author: hurt me
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(Added on Jan 12, 2007)
(This month 14141 readers) (Total 26618 readers) |
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A young girl must sacrifice herself to ensure a good harvest for the coming year. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (6.5/10) |
Average
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Reviewer:
JonMaddux
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Jan 14, 2007 |
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I would agree with lews, more character developement would have been nice but i suspect you were looking for a quick short randy tale. It was a bit brutal with her death but in historical context it was acceptable, i wouldnt have said that if she were hacked in half by the priests. Not bad over all. (7/10)
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Reviewer:
chksng19
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Jan 13, 2007 |
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A fair tale, somewhat short on developing the character. (6/10)
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Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Jan 12, 2007 |
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Cruel and crude, just as advertised. The historic details are left vauge, but that isn't the point of the story anyway. A little more emotional depth from the victim might have enlivened the story. Overall a good read for those who've read the warning codes and choose to press on. (8/10)
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