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The Expert
Author: Dex Noxter
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(Added on Nov 5, 2006)
(This month 84612 readers) (Total 126184 readers) |
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The training of a mature painslut (not experienced but willing to learn). Her intensive pain-training (from corporal punishments to torture sessions) as well as humility-training and forced labor. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
fitzgilbert
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Mar 28, 2012 |
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good story bad typography (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
dennisthmn
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Nov 10, 2006 |
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very good. she will be a excellent slave. I would love to see her (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
npatek
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Nov 8, 2006 |
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I like the combination of hard work and punishment. The expectation to humiliate tall mature woman is delightful.
The first chapter is very programmatic. This spoils the thrill a little. I miss the reactions of the couple. Is she nodding, is she fearful, is the other master agreeing? Also the scene is not clear. Are they all in the livingroom during this speech? Or are the hosts are still on the patio greeting their guest? (7/10)
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- Replied by:
mrlibido
(Edit) (Nov 8, 2006)
- She was nodding, fearful and expecting, her Master agreeing, we were all on the patio near the massive wooden outdoor table.
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Nov 6, 2006 |
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A short start; more of a preamble than really a chapter. Hoping the rest is more fully told, with some voyages into the minds of the Master and the Slave as well as the trainer. Score will change when I have more of a story to read.
(Your English is very good!) (7/10)
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- Replied by:
mrlibido
(Edit) (Nov 8, 2006)
- Hi
thanks for reviewing. The second part will be a little more longer but much harder. I'm sure that it would be also much appreciated than previous (which is some kind of warming up - indeed).
Regards
- Replied by:
mrlibido
(Edit) (Nov 9, 2006)
- Hi
thanks for reviewing. The second part will be a little more longer but much harder. I'm sure that it would be also much appreciated than previous (which is some kind of warming up - indeed).
Regards
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| Reviewer:
bigcat
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Nov 6, 2006 |
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Good terse start. Look forward to more. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
diem
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Nov 5, 2006 |
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I'll be watching for parts 2 & 3 (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
slutsteph
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Nov 5, 2006 |
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mmmm, girl can hardly wait for Part II, where the slave is marked for her Master! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Nov 5, 2006 |
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part 1 did not offer much and i personal prefer a regular layout with out the color schemem, but each to their own (5/10)
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