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The new radio Station
Author: Woolfighter
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(Added on Oct 19, 2006)
(This month 16426 readers) (Total 30893 readers) |
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A new way of broadcasting alters step by step a peaceful community. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
GreenEyedFemme
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Jun 18, 2010 |
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Intriguing idea, but not written as well as it could be. (5/10)
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Mandy001
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Mar 25, 2007 |
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What can I say, being in the unenviable position of being female, but with a penchant for dominating and humilating my fellow sisters, I certainly wouldn't want to be subjected to this wickedly neat mind control. The story was was well thought out, and exquisitely executed. I agree with the others, it could use some editing and spell checking, but who am I to get nitpicky, as I am guilty of the same. Good work and I hope to see some more in the same gendra. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
woolfighter
(Edit) (Mar 31, 2007)
- That's the kind of review we authors love.
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| Reviewer:
niftyfree
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Oct 21, 2006 |
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Nice to see a new Woolfighter story.
ps Spellcheck and proofread.
(9/10)
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- Replied by:
woolfighter
(Edit) (Oct 29, 2006)
- Thx, it's nice not to get punished for bad spelling.
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Oct 20, 2006 |
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A number of minor editing concerns; wrong or missing words. But the story? Outstanding idea and a fun way of showing it. Nice work, really enjoyed it. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
woolfighter
(Edit) (Oct 20, 2006)
- I'm always happy to read you enjoy my stories. Thanks for reviewing.
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| Reviewer:
Millie
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Oct 20, 2006 |
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This was a very good story, the gradual changes seen through one woman's eyes worked really well. Definitely a good read.
(8/10)
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- Replied by:
woolfighter
(Edit) (Oct 20, 2006)
- Thanks for telling me.
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| Reviewer:
ElectricBadger
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Oct 19, 2006 |
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Good work, really imaginative and I loved the processual changes and how they were laid out. Could use a bit of spell check and whatnot, but that's not a biggie. Great job! (7/10)
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- Replied by:
woolfighter
(Edit) (Oct 20, 2006)
- Thank you for your review. Yeah, english spelling is still my hobby horse.
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| Reviewer:
Jeanne F
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Oct 19, 2006 |
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I was reluctant at first because mc usually is soo boring, adolescent daydreaming of 'power' over his classmates and the like...
Here it is funny, outrageous, well written. It could be a bit more 'sexplicit' and 'sadistic' but, hey, author's privilege. All in all a keeper, meaning I'll keep it in my collection! (8/10)
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- Replied by:
woolfighter
(Edit) (Oct 20, 2006)
- Thanks for reviewing and for collecting it. I agree there's a lack of humiliation (sexplicit sadism) but I wanted to try something different.
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Oct 19, 2006 |
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the first word in the story i assumne should have been after, you have alter (5/10)
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- Replied by:
woolfighter
(Edit) (Oct 19, 2006)
- Thanks for the correction, but is that all you've to say?
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