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From Child\'s Play to.......??
Author: bondoy
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(Added on Jul 26, 2006)
(This month 51728 readers) (Total 63046 readers) |
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Childhood games lead to an adult\'s fantasy and it\'s enaction. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
longhairslavegirl
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Jul 28, 2006 |
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SUPERB story ! Kept me interested from start to finish! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Millie
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Jul 27, 2006 |
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The storyline was great, I enjoyed it from start to finish, but please read your work, or better still get someone else to do it for you. There were mistakes that spoilt the flow of a very good story.
(8/10)
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- Replied by:
bondoy
(Edit) (Jul 27, 2006)
- hi Millie
Many thanks for reading and taking the time to review my story.
Many thanks for the very constructive advice.
I have to say that I thought that I did read it thoroughly - several times and I did have another writer who I admire read it for me.
However I will take your suggestions on board as I write my next one.
kind regards
bondoy
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Jul 27, 2006 |
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Great story and I confirm the opinion of abitbent that it holds you up. Also an end you would not expect! Excellent (9/10)
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- Replied by:
bondoy
(Edit) (Jul 27, 2006)
- hi jip
Many thanks for your review of my first story. It does encourage me to produce more. There is one already on the drawing board.
Kind Regards
bondoy
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| Reviewer:
abitbent
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Jul 27, 2006 |
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This story is a lot of fun and holds your attention for the duration. Bondoy this is a great first try and i'm glad you decided to share your imagination with all of us. The character development is wonderful, and the suspense is in all the right places. I hope you'll endeavour to write again. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
bondoy
(Edit) (Jul 27, 2006)
- Thank you for taking out the time to review my story. And you comments are very encouraging for a new writer like me.
I do intend to continue to write more stories. Reviews like this are great encouragement to keep up the enthusiasm.
I will post my future stories here.
Thanks bondoy
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