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Work of a Slut Author: chooky104
(Added on Jul 11, 2006) (This month 65809 readers) (Total 95979 readers)
A day in the life of a true Slut.

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Weighed Average (?): (8/10)
Average Rating: (8.5/10)
Highest Rating: (10/10)
Lowest Rating: (6/10)

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Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Jul 19, 2006
very well written (9/10)

Reviewer: H Dean (Edit) Rating: Jul 19, 2006
A pretty hot story, over all. The descriptions of the action were pretty solid groin yankers and the concept was relatively interesting. However, the writing style needs a bit of refinement and certain phrasings need to be adjusted. "Undid" or "Undoing" should never be used. Also, there was a switch in writing perspectives about mid-way through the first chapter that was quite ponderous. The technical errors were also rather a hinderance. Really, a few adjustments would make this tale quite good. (6/10)

Reviewer: oldwino (Edit) Rating: Jul 16, 2006
Great concept but too short. This is almost an outline for what could be a great story or series. I think the author has great potential. (10/10)

Reviewer: al90000 (Edit) Rating: Jul 12, 2006
an excellent description of a whore slut (10/10)

Reviewer: heycarrieanne (Edit) Rating: Jul 11, 2006
I really enjoyed your story. Had your grammar been better I would have given you a much higher score. If you would like some suggestions on how I think your writing could be improved, please email me. (6/10)

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