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Disciplining Regina
Author: The Chairman
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(Added on Jun 22, 2006)
(This month 54518 readers) (Total 74194 readers) |
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Regina makes a mistake at work. Unfortunately, the company practices physical correction. But this her first offense, so how bad could it be? |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Mothbrad
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May 13, 2007 |
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A very well written story, and one that worked very well for me, despite having a consensual element to it. I think the fact that the violence itself is only referred to, and not actually made a direct part of the story, works really well. After all, we've all read stories where those devices are used, and the psychological aspect of the punishment is made much more tangible with this (literary) device.
One thing I thought was slightly lacking was that, as the punishment was not a part of the story, what WAS a part of it could have been made even more detailed - the tour of the punishment room; the medical exam; and so on. (8/10)
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heycarrieanne
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May 11, 2007 |
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This was a very good story! I personally didn't miss the violence of the beating, but I think some will! LOL I look forward to reading more. (7/10)
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mkemse
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Mar 6, 2007 |
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loved every apsect of the story (9/10)
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Polecat
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Aug 2, 2006 |
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Forget about the negative comments. The build up was great. Who cares that you did not describe the torture in detail. That is why we have an imagination. (8/10)
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La Toya
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Jun 26, 2006 |
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So what was the punishment. It went from something to nothing? Please add a second chapter, with her punishment (7/10)
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chksng19
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Jun 26, 2006 |
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Aargh! such a wonderful buildup, then..poof.. nothing. REally needs a second chapter, describing the action. (7/10)
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jip
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Jun 23, 2006 |
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Good fiction but pity that some actual punishment is not described. (7/10)
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