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My Awakening
Author: Callidus
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(Added on Jun 8, 2006)
(This month 111986 readers) (Total 135876 readers) |
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A man discovers that he has spontaniously obtained the power to control others and to stop time, so he decides to have some fun. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
hotblackchick
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Mar 24, 2009 |
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This story has a sizzling theme. I loved it. There are so many possibilities here. I wish that it was current and that you were still submitting parts to it. I loved the small bits of insight into the mind of the protagonist. I also liked that he wasn't all goody-goody but there was a definite three dimensional person here. The girls were also opening up, in terms of character development. Let me know if you pick this one back up. It would be easy to take this one to a ten. I could see the development and growth taking place as it was nearing the end. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Jun 9, 2006 |
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Not a bad MC story, though the character is a little shallow. Lots of possibilities here, (even with rich Mom, eh? LOL)
Interested to see where you go with it. (7/10)
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