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Supermodel in distress
Author: JensenDenmark
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(Added on May 25, 2006)
(This month 49511 readers) (Total 59167 readers) |
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Supermodel \"Lucky\" Ann August ends up charged with battery, indorderly intoxination and resisting arrest. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jun 26, 2010 |
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Good idea, which sadly drowns a bit in the inadequate use of the English language. jenseDenmark is obviously Danish, and good for him, but a little work on the mastering of the language he wants to write in, could do wonders.
Even more so because "Supermodel In Distress" merits a better treatment.
Good, veering to very good. Would have struck gold should the vocabulary been more diverse and less stilted, the latter due to some literal translations instead of the proper English counterpart(s).
JJ (8/10)
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mkemse
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Mar 8, 2008 |
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very nicestory, suprised i missed this one in the past (9/10)
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