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Iniquity
Author: Cobalic
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(Added on Apr 28, 2006)
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Kate and Jessica planned, and executed, a plan to make them richer then they ever dreamed possible. Something didn\'t happen as they planned... This story will be updated as it is written |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 20, 2009 |
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worth the time to read (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Ruby
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May 17, 2006 |
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Just finished chapter 3 and this story has a great deal of promise. What will happen to Kate and Jessica? I'd be very interested in the POV of their captors. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Apr 30, 2006 |
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I got lost with the location jumps. You seem to have a good start, but I will wait for other chapters before raising my rating (6/10)
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heycarrieanne
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Apr 28, 2006 |
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I think this has the potential to be a really good story, the plot and theme are fine. But, I got confused the way you bounced from location to location. Perhaps more clarification would make the story easier to read. I hope you continue it. (7/10)
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kemosabe
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Apr 28, 2006 |
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Great beginning! Only problem I found was a little confusion as to characters' names not fitting the appropriate scene. Still didn't detract from an excellent start to what I hope is a continuing narrative. (10/10)
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