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Mother\'s Dilemma
Author: Master C
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(Added on Apr 5, 2006)
(This month 127093 readers) (Total 251688 readers) |
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Tracy is blackmailed by her boss, and forced into a world of slavery. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
sharkshark
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Jul 16, 2011 |
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Totally amazing! I love when Sue damands to be pleasured by little Tracey. Maybe you could work Tracey's mother into the plot. The mother protests, trying to rescue her little girl and Sue quickly subdues her, demonstating whose little girl she is! (9/10)
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lisaduzblax
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Mar 6, 2010 |
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one of my favorites (9/10)
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gundam
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Oct 23, 2006 |
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Excellent plot, writer wrote just enough descriptions to give reasder to fill in the details. Lots of action (which I like) and very few words.
Please keep it comming (9/10)
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La Toya
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Oct 22, 2006 |
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Missing descriptions of the cast. While I would have left the kids in school, so say the son's sports team could use her. what you did worked great.
I would like to see it get a little harder, when it comes to the family's use of her (8/10)
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woolfighter
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Oct 22, 2006 |
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Slow, slow to the very bottom. great. (9/10)
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RhondaLee
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Jul 17, 2006 |
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There is a total lack of physical description of the main character. (10/10)
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jip
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Jul 3, 2006 |
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Good story, only a little bit to repetitive at the end. (7/10)
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oldwino
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Jul 2, 2006 |
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This is a great series. I love it but my gf(38) loves it more. She hopes to read of more public exhibition and public sexual humiliaton. (10/10)
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bigcat
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May 22, 2006 |
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Moves quickly. Little bit of everything. Good domination, humiliation tale. (10/10)
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mkemse
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Apr 30, 2006 |
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This is one of the hottest stories i have read in a long time, well written, flows great, great detai everything waswondefull i hope you plan to add more chapters real soon
It just keeps getting better and hotter (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
C_Lakewood
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Apr 7, 2006 |
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I'm not sure how anyone could give this a 9 or
10. Indeed, a 7 is a gift. The plot is tired,
the characters cardboard, and the writing
pedestrian at best. (4/10)
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mike uk reader
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Apr 6, 2006 |
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The old tried blackmailed plot by so many Authors to this site the big surpise is that this one keeps you interested from the start to the very end and another surpise is later on in the story the boss'es wife is involved in Tracy's training in becoming the perfect little sex slave.
Wheather or not there is to be more chapters to your wonderful story remains to be seen perhaps that will be another surpise in the meantime for this effort of "Part One" I have given you a high rating. (Well done Master C) (9/10)
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slutsteph
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Apr 6, 2006 |
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This is a tried and true plot, but a wonderful start, already hot with surprises. girl juices and hopes the story continues, with even more permanent and deep humiliation and slavery. (10/10)
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geoff
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Apr 6, 2006 |
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Stilted language took a lot away from the story. The story really didn't flow for that reason. Spell Checkers are great but proofreaders who can spell are better! mkemse gave a 10 but 10's know the difference between loose and lose and are written in prose. This wasn't, unfortunately. I was toying with a 6 or 7 and opted on the side of generosity. Try rereading it again looking at sentences and the flow of words developing the story, then read some of the 'real' 10's. You definitely have a plot - work on the presentation. (7/10)
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