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Anything to declare
Author: Janet
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(Added on Apr 4, 2006)
(This month 50368 readers) (Total 65125 readers) |
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This is the second chapter of a fantasy I have created for my own pleasure. The first chapter had me returning from a holiday in the sun and sand, and being framed by a female customs officer with a drugs stash. She has removed me to a room where there are two of her colleges or disciples, and I am chained face down on a table, with three holes. One for my petrified face and one for each of my breast. I hope you enjoy my ramblings and any feed back would be appreciated. This is dedicated to my wonderful Mistress Isobelle with whom I share this new world we have discovered. I love you mistress |
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Average (?):  (4.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
bracemaiden
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Apr 22, 2006 |
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I think that "has some promise, the author could improve it" is more fitting than "lacks any real quality".
I liked the detail of putting the hair through the hole in the mask, and the feeling of relief as the first gag came out, but there is no setup to get to know the characters, and the story is 1/3 the minimum length for the site. . . (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Apr 5, 2006 |
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The was not much of a story to review. (4/10)
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